Lavender Mist

Lavender Mist

A Poem by SyberRose



She savored the sweet bouquet of his lips

The  taste of elderberry wine~

He tempted with grapes of passion,
                                Overflowing the brim of desire~

 

The delicacy of love ~ she sampled
               Within the burning wick of candlelight~

Love faded with crimson clover sunsets,

But aglow within the gold flaxen moon~

 

Memories swirl in the twilight hour

Within sheerness of the lavender mist~

Gossamer breeze of enchantment,

Lingers in the bewitchment of the wind~


She bids the bare essence of him adieu,

Sachet memories and eyes ~ sapphire blue~

 

©SyberRose

 

 



 

© 2013 SyberRose


Author's Note

SyberRose
thank you for reading.

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What a wonderfully written and transcendently inspiring piece!
you swept me off my feet as I taste these words of yours xx
worth a 100/100 rating,honestly

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gossamer breeze of enchantment, lavender mist, all lovely thoughts swirling in my head... Wonderful! Diane

Posted 6 Years Ago


SyberRose

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much Diane...I'm happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose :)
Amazing imagery, really beautifully done

Posted 6 Years Ago


SyberRose

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for taking time to peek in...Rose:)
Oh Rose, always a pleasure to come by and read. Such a centerpiece of memories. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


SyberRose

6 Years Ago

Hi Shaun...thank you for peeking in ...Its always nice hearing from you...:)
Shaun Payton

6 Years Ago

Hi Rose! :) You most welcomey!:)
Very beautiful and eloquent. It feels like a single moment you have some how stretched then divided before bottling the essence of each feeling.
Nice work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


SyberRose

6 Years Ago

Thank you Matt...I appreciate your nice compliments and thank you for peeking in...Rose:)
Such a lovely write, full of beautiful words and imagery. I not only read the words, but felt them...full of passion and love.

"Memories swirl in the twilight hour
Within sheerness of the lavender mist"

Beautiful lines! My new fav of yours.



Posted 6 Years Ago


loved the title!!!!!!
I am so glad I found this poem- amazing images

Posted 6 Years Ago


SyberRose

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much...and im glad you enjoyed it:)
'Gossamer breeze of enchantment,
Lingers in the bewitchment of the wind~'

a great last couplet, it appealed to me a lot. some breathtaking images, almost sensual, always refined. fantastic.

Posted 6 Years Ago


SyberRose

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much...and thank you for peeking in...Rose:)
You have such an eye for pictures, Rose! I love all the pictures you have. This is such a beautiful write with amazing imagery and lovely wording.

~ Noodle.

Posted 6 Years Ago


SyberRose

6 Years Ago

Thank you Sye...it is fun looking of paintings and photos to match the poems...nice to see you again.. read more
delicately said ...with undertones of powerful passion... trippy pic.... we have an elderberry bush that has finally blossomed (after 3 yrs) ...and it is incredibly delicate and colorful ... i'm not sure about the last line of the second verse starting with "But" ... i stumble on it a bit .... love the ending ... its perfect ... E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


SyberRose

6 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time to read...I just noticed i had but in the last two lines so I removed it f.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

yes ...makes more sense to me... i am so humbled... love to you .. and peace and joy .. E.

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Added on June 28, 2013
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SyberRose

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