Hold Me Up

i was bored. haha

Your words cut deep

Hurt worse than my knives

I sit here watching the blood

Hoping no one hears my cries.

 

Falling deeper and deeper

Into this hole

Wishing I could fly out

And get back my heart you stole.

 

Because no one can save me

Your the only one now

Who can hold me up

But you don't know how.

Author's Note

review plz!

Reviews

[Keriun]

Excellent! This really looks like lyrics of a song! Wow, I've absolutely nothing bad to say about it ^^ Keep it up :)

[D Hughes]

i can feel the emotion and over all its well put togather
good joob

[Bud]

Your emotions are conveyed well here. Excellent.

[Hiakudeath]

nice

[snapstache]

E it!