The End of Me

thnx for the title suggestions.! ZoomZoom's wins. :D. Im pretty sure this poem isnt my best... so if u have any suggestions at all, plz tell me.!

Crying my eyes out tonight

Because now nothing is right

I'm so confused

You lie, you cheat,

I'm used.

Praying for a solution

Hoping its not all an illusion

The pencil is shaking in my hand

As my mind forms a plan

I feel the earth quaking

I hear the waves breaking

Is this the end of me?

I guess we'll have to see.

Author's Note

not my best. plz tell me what to change.

Reviews

[ProseAspiration]

This poem was focus more on the feelings and that's the stuff i like to see. How about seeing one focus on happy maybe? Its in there and i know it'll be beautiful if you can find that something that makes you smile. =)

[R J Askew]

Change nothing. But you do need a title. ME AND A MILLION OTHERS ??

[snapstache]

Well first as should me a (i think)
The title should be: The End of Me
Great poem!
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