Eternity is forever

  Eternity is forever

You promised me with forever,

Neck oozing crimson,

More pain almost numb,

Belonging to eternal hell,

 

Flashing Memories,

Flashing eyes,

Seduce me with,

That sexy smile,

 

Forever is a long time,

 

Hold me while I cry,

Bury me in the realms,

Eternity takes to long,

I watch you make the pain,

 

Staring at my hands,

Porcelain skin, Crimson eyes,

Stained with teardrops,

Stained with lies,

 

Forever is a long time,

 

Descending to my coffin,

No such thing as death,

Awaken from this nightmare,

Forever is a long time.

 

 

Reviews

[*Rain*]

Of course, my mind's eye is now swimming with vampyric images. Without ever actually using the word vampire, you conveyed your message well. It was great to read the words of what it might be like to be turned, and to realize what exactly "eternity" would mean to someone immortal. "Bury me in the realms,

Eternity takes to long,"
Awesome job!!!

[Miss Prince]

That's haunting, that phrase: Forever is a long time.

Oooooo....

[Wondering Mind]

Very clever imagery and description to convey your message; the hints of red in your repeated "Forever..." added to the effect. Nicely done.

[siobhan]

i like your descriptive stanzas. you doa really great job of capturing an immortal lifetime.