Tiny little fairy

Tiny little fairy

A Poem by Vee

Dainty is she for she reaches onto thou

Pretty is her features

Devious is her smile for she has dynamite in her pocket

Tiny little fairy

 

Pocket size and ready to go

Don’t mess with the small one

The magical little creature

Tiny little fairy

 

Glorious is the song she sings

Loving is her smile

Greedy is her intentions

Tiny little fairy

 

She takes her tiny hand

Offering opportunities

Do not trust her

Tiny little fairy….

 

 

Evil little fairy

© 2008 Vee


Author's Note

Vee
I'm a very small girl and often compared with a fairy for i am devious and loving... evil and kind .. Dynamite comes in small packages

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Jen
Very cute. I like the duality of it, almost a gemini feel. only a small nit, and I'm not a poet so feel free to ignore it, you use "is" where it should be "are".

"Pretty is her features"
>>Probably either would work but it should be either Pretty are her features, or Pretty is her feature

"Greedy is her intentions"
>>Same here, Greedy are her intentions or Greedy is her intention

Over all a fun read, thanks for sharing. (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


lol it's like reading the darker version of Tinkerbell...

It's short and simple, yet it's still a rather enjoyable piece to read...

So, it's all good tho...


Posted 15 Years Ago


She takes her tiny hand

Offering opportunities

Do not trust her

Tiny little fairy�.

Wow! This, along with the line about dynamite! How many great ways you read and imagine this fairy. I am short, and I am drawn to pixies and other fae. The pure mischeif, and allure in them. Great job!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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