give me your heart

give me your heart

A Poem by Vee
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Sunken eyes and a bullet hole, where my heart once lay beating. No hope for tomorrow if tomorrow never comes. one step away and you do pray god, "Ttake mercy on me. " But you've had your fun, that now does run as it streams right down ur neck. Now is the day your heart did stray, and now you pay dearly, for with him your heart will stay as its beating in his hand.You take a breath and with your last words you tell him
 the sinister truth .. 'I'll love you till i die my love. " and with a bitter taste in your mouth you stare at that beating heart.Your blood covered white dress, soaked all in red you slip away, and oh you dread the bitter gates of hell, where you know your going now, god does not forgive the sin of a demonous hell child . god does not forgive the vampires and oh you cry your last cry and then your gone. good bye
 

© 2009 Vee


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This has a nice slow sort of drum beat to it, the images are not only clear, but the words, oh those words..


Nice........................

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Added on April 29, 2009

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Vee
Vee

6 feet under, IL



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Well time to update this again not much to say my name is Vee and sometimes when I can't sleep I partake in the seemingly lost art of pen and paper. more..

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