I am

I am from...

The blackness of a cold heart

 

I resign in...

The Darkest part of the Coldeest Foroest

 

I am loved by...

Unwavering eyes and black fur

 

I am protected by...

The hashest bite and the softest whimpers

 

I run with...

A midnight's Dream adn A Vengeful Thought

 

I am ruled by...

Harsh thoughts and crude bruises.

 

I hunt with...

No one but a dark night and an evil thought

 

I am from....

A path that had no sign of hope

 

I live for...

The hope I found in his heart

 

I hoped for...

A life with no rule.

 

I got...

A life where no one boths to ask what I think

 

 

Reviews

[quinfinn]

you are in... a very dark place when you wrote this poem. i like it. i got the sense of walking through the forest primeval and expected to be lunged at any minute from behind a tree or undergrowth. creepy. crafty. wonderful.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

the repetition helps the reader to flow quickly through the prose, so maybe take it back a little, the imagery is insanely dominant, well done

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

theres a lot of sadnss and i think there is hidden anger

[TheUnforgivinFallenAnge..]

I can almost relate to this