I live

THis is how I use to be before I found my mate

I live

In a world of Pain

 

I trive

Off of everyone's hatred

 

I feed

Everyone distaste

 

I help

The distruction of one's heart

 

I live

In trhe darkest corners of the Forest

 

I thrive

off the angry words of others

 

I feed

THe evil thought running through your mind

 

I help

Deaden the weight of hate

Reviews

[quinfinn]

clever...very clever. this almost sounds like a riddle describing the dark one.
very nicely done!

[Daydreamer54]

I like, it it sounds dramatic and dark. great write! :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Anger, fear and pain dominate this prose, a well adversed reading and lengthly debated research, well done

[TheUnforgivinFallenAnge..]

Ok than.......

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

Lots of anger in this one too.