A Gift for You

A Gift for You

A Poem by Sylo's Rose
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this is to my fiance who is always there when i need him.

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Here's my Heart. Lock and Key.

To you I give this precious gift.

Treat it right and keep it whole.

It hold my secret for you to know.

Hold it close and keep it safe.

For it's been broken many times before.

But you i trust with all my worth.

So don't prove me wrong.

Like other have.

i trust in you to keep me whole.

You are my anchor and my safety.

This gift is an honor.

Something to be proud of.

Don't take it and hurt me.

But take it and love me.

I give it to you because you show me love, trust, safety and equality.

So heres my Heart. Lock and Key.

 

© 2011 Sylo's Rose


Author's Note

Sylo's Rose
This is what he shows me

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This is nice, but the flow has a little trouble. and i'm sorry i don't have a enough time right now to tell you why, do me a favor and reread it and see what i'm talking about and then ask me to review it again when i have more time.
thank you Moon fixer

Posted 8 Years Ago


Crazy with imagery and shock emotion, well done, great read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is intense and filled with trust and beauty. wonderfully and personally expressed. very good write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aw, it's so sweet. When you love someone, you give them to power to break ur heart,but you trust them not to.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Sylo's Rose
Sylo's Rose

Neverland, OR



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I'm a littel wolf lost in the big forest :( But I love to play and hunt and hang out with my pack mates. I also looooooveeeee to write. Thats why im here. To make friends and share my writings :) more..

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