Until You Come I Will Sit Here

 

 

With you,

I do all these things -

The luxury of common things

With wonder of mundane talks

 

I march the little fields

And gossip with the birds

That inhabit every season

In cedar-scented longing pure

 

With you,

I've come to the talented peaks

Of my life's meaning

To enable rainbow moments

 

And to swallow flowered palaces

And I lie on blue cushions and watch the sea

All because you are beside me

I hear your voice, it is the breeze

 

With you,

I show the return of waiting years

For the drink of hot sunlight

To make me full at last. 

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

This is lovely; vivid and lyrical. What a beautiful way to express full and complete affection, where the everyday is wonderful because of one's beloved. Nice!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This is breathtaking...Oh, to have a love like this; finding such wanton pleasure in the little mundane things... *sigh*

[Sympatico]

*sigh* yes

[Mariam]

wow beautiful imagery(talented peaks,rainbow moments...) It would be a nice song.

[Sympatico]

yes I too serve beauty