Music Man.

July 2007. For Mick. <3

When I was a boy, I went to see the music man play.
He sent me skyrocketing into a world of rythym & blues.
And yes, to this day, I stand on stage,
my guitar in hand,
thinking of the man who lit the fuse.

Reviews

[Emmie]

Very enjoyable read, but might I suggest that you put this into stanzas or a stanza. It looks more "poetic", but if you want this is fine as well. I love the emotion in this piece that you were able to capture in merely 3 lines. Think about what I suggested, and let me know what you think =) Keep writing.