THE NEED

 

 

Kiss me
like you are hungry to reach inside
and draw me into you

Touch me
like you ache to feel me beneath you
and show me your fire

and love me
like you've never loved before
with the measure of your soul

then I will always be yours

 

Reviews

[Gandré]

this was precisely said, poetic and original. thank you for posting it.
I like

and love me
like you've never loved before
with the measure of your soul �-------favorite lines!

[Juanita]

This is a very passionate poem. I love it....and it has the perfect title,"The Need." Wonderful piece!

[Crazy Cat Man]

very romantic and beautiful

[Julia]

That's it! That's what's being going on in my head for days! You've got it. Way to go. It's connecting with an audience and speaking from your soul. I like the construction of your stanzas and the meter. It gets the point across in such a small span of words.
I love:
with the measure of your soul

[Brianna Brie]

and love me
like you've never loved before
with the measure of your soul

Passion...that is what I want! Perfect poem!

[Crystal Elisa]

this is kickass! I love it. It's a fav!

CE