YOU THINK YOU'RE A DOG

YOU THINK YOU'RE A DOG

A Poem by T
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You think you're a dog.

 

 

 

I swear you think you're a dog

because you bring me things

and ask me to play,

beg me to play.

You are so possesive when others are around!

You  practically growl at strange men

who have the unfortunate perception that you are nice.....

and you watch them, making sure no harm comes to me.

When we are alone you follow me everywhere,

whatever room I am in, you are there.

You love me with all of your heart,

but you steal and destroy my things.

And  I couldn't live without you

...................silly cat.

 

© 2008 T


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Hrmmm, I feel somewhat odd and out of place here. I read the piece before reading the reviews; and even at the end, I still feel that you were talking about a significant other. I was drawn to the realization that we tend to stereotype dogs and cats so differently; yet the behaviors of a pet (or a loved one) can be so similar that it does them injustice at times. I could easily switch out cat and dog in the piece, because I felt the overall meaning was more about love.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A delightful write and enjoyable read~

Well DonE!~Fran Marie



Posted 15 Years Ago


Hrmmm, I feel somewhat odd and out of place here. I read the piece before reading the reviews; and even at the end, I still feel that you were talking about a significant other. I was drawn to the realization that we tend to stereotype dogs and cats so differently; yet the behaviors of a pet (or a loved one) can be so similar that it does them injustice at times. I could easily switch out cat and dog in the piece, because I felt the overall meaning was more about love.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol

I'm guilty of swallowing the hook too hehehe :)

Nice work

Brian

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

ha ha...I thought you were talking about your boyfriend. Good job!

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

ha ha ha! Funny!

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

oh! i liked this, you took me along very nicely, fooled me completly, good one

Posted 17 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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