The Shadow That Calls

A quick poem done by me.

I hear you calling my name

I turn around

and you are not there

I hear your voice

but, all I see is your shadow

It is haunting me

but, I can not seem to banish

what I truly love

So come to me

and show me

what is like to live again.

Author's Note

Please note that I typed it that way for a reason. XD

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Short sweet and to the point, I lked it.

[Loribeth215]

Ouick, but to the point, and passionate in a lonely way. Great! :)

[Michael X]

this reads heartfelt, imo, i think it can be better, and if you
could capture the same concept, with original ideas, and touch the meter up,
it would be phenomonal, I see it as a great poem, right now
and I really enjoyed reading this, thanks.