Who is Right?

For the innocent victims who were killed in the war

In this world of war and fights.

Against the two or more groups.

Where most of evil ones fight for power.

The heroes fight for good and justice.

And some fight just for the sake of it.

It destroy each one of them and shatters it,

but still the war must go on and on,

so that every person gets what they want.



Finding weakness and pain in each one of them.

Hurting people with rage, to the place

where it inflict and provoke the most of all.

Keeping a stoned heart and senseless mind.

Like the wind from both the sides of war.

Turning it into huge cyclone across the area,

catching innocent victim and killing them around

without any reason or cause for them to fight.

But now they also join the war to stop the war.

For their sake and the revenge of their loved ones



They destroy what ever they touch or even see,

even at their own comrade that passes away,

by the murderous hand of other comrades doings.

And death counts the soul of the departed body.

But the soul nor the body could do nothing, but watch

Death smiling and devouring the body and soul by it ways.

By the time the war is all done and over,

notice the emptiness all over again in everyone's heart.

And work starts all over again with more sadness and pain



As the evil ones may get the power and wealth,

with the cost of the previous power fading.

And so the hunger for power carries on and on.

The heroes may get their justice and the good,

But with the cost of their love one falling apart.

So the heroes also share losses and grieves in the war.

Well the others shall win the war,

but due to no reason they will still feel empty.

And they will start to wander around for more quest



In the heart of battle against the people and groups,

there will be no good in any side of it.

But only chaos of telling that "I am right."

And the heat to prove it is very intensive,

that is eaten up in the battle after battle.

It is for those freckle minded,

who cannot find a way out by itself.

But only influence others to fight for them.

And the innocent catching the eyes of peace

saying for both "Who is right ?"

Author's Note

Hope to see your opinion

Reviews

[wordman]

each one of us was born in this world to serve our lord
only the devil can show you another way but if you will look upon life
you can see the lie

[Terrence Chang]

Well said wordman and thank you for reviewing my poem

[Lizardo]

''Finding weakness and pain in each one of them. ''
Wars are really bad and kill a lot of innocent people
I do hope that some day, this madness may stop
Awesome writing Terrence!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Laar I am glad that you liked it.

[Jamestown]

This is terrific friend, Unfortunately when war happens. Innocent people die, and
for what, greed and power, it's terrible, I liked this write a lot, thanks for sharing.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you James

[Confuser]

I think the message and compassion is wonderful. There are some good lines. When I began, was told to read slowly aloud. And that helps. I love the line, freckled mines. I have said something like that, but it fits better with your story/poem of war. Maybe it could flow better and maybe some grammatical errors, but you can work on that. Your passion for humanity is clear and admirable. Thank you.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you very much. I am also writing a book on demonology and human psychosis hope to compete by mids of next year and published soon

[Confuser]

Sounds scary. Wow. ............................................: