Where am I

If you enjoy philosophy then please read this.

We all feel pain
We all feel hate
For this we all have endless question
With no one to answer
It is like a blood stain
In each one's heart

We all are insane
With not any shame
As time goes old
We still don't realise
What horrible things we have made
But who is to blame?

We all have a sleeping cancer
Waiting to be born and go wild
This is the world that I live in
Where love is divided by hate
To pierce the innocent child
With the dagger to his heart
To make one smile
Think of the million people who died

It is a sickness that you want to leave
But there is no where out
We fall down on our knees
Joining the hands waiting for a hero
With this we all sell our souls
But who is taking your soul?

Author's Note

This is want usually comes to my mind. Thought of writing and posting it. Hope you like what I think. Plus I don't know if the title is appropriate. Please suggest if you have one for me. Thank you

Reviews

[Yash]

I think the title is appropriate.

Did you create the title before the poem and use it for inspiration or was it created after.

I like the poem, it can even be called, 'this is what comes to my mind.'

Also I would like to know, is it the thought you currently have that made you write the poem or is it a message that you want to deliver to those that read it.

[Terrence Chang]

Its both I would say. I have thought of the title first and let the words flow. This is how I usually write my poems

[Jamestown]

I think this write is killer, I like the message so much, and the last line is sweet.
Who's taking your soul? Jesus is my brother, Jesus is, PTL! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

Thanks James

[Khyati]

:) Beautifully thought and put up..
Just one correction...
But there is no where ( not were ) out

[Terrence Chang]

Thanks Khyati. Thank you for picking my silly mistake

[Khyati]

lol.. It was just a typo and we both know it :) Don't worry.

[Confuser]

Of course I love it. Very profound Chang. Wow, heartwrenching - it is so true of course. Thank you for writing - a reminder of a very sad world somewhere at any given time. Lovely. Keep writing.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Dale I am truly honored to have you as a reviewer. But it is even greater to have you as my friend. And that will make the world happy and hoppy

[Confuser]

I am naive Chang, you boys, you never know, but if you lived in America, I would wish you to be my son's friend. You seem to be such a nice, well mannered young man. Remember, I'm always the mother first and foremost and see his eyes in yours and many other young boys trying to find themselves in this crazy mad world.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much. My grandparents told me this " A good man is a good man. No matter where he goes he will still be a good man."

[Confuser]

Wise grandparents, I will remember the quote. Thank you.

[Terrence Chang]

My pleasure Dale

[Confuser]

You are always welcome!

[Confuser]

I re-read: send me a request for reading when you have time.

[Terrence Chang]

Sure I will send some more

[Confuser]

Great - Thank you & have a wonderful/day/evening; you know what I mean!