The Theory Of Everything

A tribute to all the astronomers who created a vision of our vacuum space

Universe is an infinite loop
As space is unimaginably big
Stars and planet make me wonder
In a finite number of matter
How are going to discover infinity

The burning star of such intensity
As the battle of gases and gravity
Prolongats in millions to billions
The spark of big bang theory

The birth of a blue stars
Or the death of a dying red stars
In the aeon of time
Spill their secret age

There countless amount of galaxies
In the light of the milky way
As we discover the mysterious nebula
The colours so elegant and fragile
That my eyes dive into their beauty

It is a grasping location for mysteries
As mathematics conflicts for accuracy
The chain reaction of supernovas
The burst of a super giant star
Thus Creates a black hole
That spaghettify anything close
And slurping it inside it's core

I am just an atom's atoms
In this third dimension class
Who want to know more
The theory of everything

Author's Note

Enjoy my new write and please send me a review so that I can improve myself.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

A very interesting write
so much wonders out there

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much river. I am glad that you liked it

[Confuser]

Chang: I thought, wow, the theory of EVERYTHING! I must read; and I am happy I did. I love science; infinity + infinity - don't think we will ever know. As a child, I recall at a young age trying to figure out what came first God or the universe and how --- silly questions. I love this writing and especially
Thus Creates a black hole
That spaghettify anything close
And slurping it inside it's core

I am just an atom's atoms
In this third dimension class
Who want to know more
The theory of everything
And don't we all, but...that's life: Thanks for great writing. Dale

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Dale

[Confuser]

You're welcome!!!

[Ana B.]

Beautiful stunning writing, reminds me of the movie with the same name.
Brilliant work!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Ana. Ya it is based on a book of Stephen Hawkins 'The Theory of Everything'.

[Emily]

I really like your wording in this one! More then I normally do!
Keep it up!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Emily. I am glad that you like my wordings in the poem

[wordman]

this poem will certainly make you wonder

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much wordman

[Jamestown]

Great thought provoking piece well written and wonderful use of words!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much James.

[Jamestown]

Very welcome, your vocabulary last two pieces has been on point:)

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you James. I have been practicing and learning a lot more than usual. I guess this are my results. I am soo very happy

[Ana D S M]

We're really just tiny specs in a bigger picture.
I enjoyed this Terence.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Lilith