February

February

A Poem by THESt3V

Oh my, I haven't felt this fifteen in a while.
I'm ready to put it all on the line.
I've got my heart on my sleeve and I'm
Ready to believe that it's going to work this time.

The sky would have to fall
To keep me from you.
And the weather's not 
Looking good at all.

And God must not be on my side,
Because tonight is not the first time
I've felt so alive. And if I'm living in 
Sin, let it be. I am what you make me.

The clouds would have to
Crash down on me.
And the weather's not 
Looking good at all.

I've been here before
And I know whats coming.
But I'd do anything to feel like that again.
To love like I did back then.`
 

© 2009 THESt3V


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That was AWESOME! I really loved it. These are the best lyrics I've read from you so far I think! :D
The breaks in the lines were perfect, and I could definitely imagine these as being lyrics to a song. Ahh, so tempting to even try singing them myself. *stares wistfully at guitar in corner of bedroom*. =P
The emotions were captured really well, and I loved the way the poem ended too.
Such a sad yet relatable piece!
Rawr.
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago



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THESt3V
THESt3V

Brampton, Canada



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Ohai. I'm Steven. A large majority of the writing on here are lyrics, written for my band. I don't know how to describe our genre, so why don't you check us out instead? www.myspace.com/nrrfl .. more..

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A Poem by THESt3V