Confiding the Girl Within

Confiding the Girl Within

A Poem by TKBickel

Oh little girl

Deep inside

His eyes see us

We can not hide

 

Careful little girl

Do not tremble under my skin

He caress our cheek

His loving warmth seeps in

 

Quickly little girl

Hold my hand

He whispers in our ear a song so sweet

Only love could understand

 

Maybe little girl

We could let him in

His fingers slide around our heart

Fluttering its beat within

 

But little girl

What if I am wrong

He now has a strong grip on our heart

Could we survive without his love for long

 

Hush little girl

Please do not whimper so

His promise will hold true

Forever combining our souls

© 2012 TKBickel


Author's Note

TKBickel
With a little nudge, I stepping out on a poem again.

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sweet and fraught with a range of emotion....well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow wow wow factor here... this is just a dark lullaby before I go to bed... I love it! you sing it, I can hear your voice! very well written!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


OOoooh...I love your font choice...the childlike innocence mixed with adult emotions. The italics...make me want to trust what is said...it pulls me in...luring me into your words. A beautiful write indeed!

Muse

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 14, 2012
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Tags: Love, trust, relationships, poem, commitment

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TKBickel
TKBickel

KC, MO



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I am a bookworm that happens to love writing. Now I finally have the time to write a story that's been clawing its way out of my brain. God help me before my brain explodes. -The Forever Hunting Se.. more..

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