I WASN'T WRONG

I WASN'T WRONG

A Poem by TROYVID
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I wasn't wrong to trust, believe in you and to show you my scars

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Young me believing that promise are rea,l fake was your name your NAME you were truly at the aim to full my life with SHAME,WHO  SHOULD I BLAME YOU OR ME ?  DIDN'T KNOW you were on a mission a well viewed vision of making me over excited promising me things that we not happen I also didn't know that you had a PLAN B OF MAKING ME FEEL less of myself Today 15/09/23 am telling you.your plans were a success cause I longer know myself.😭 Make sure you mark your to do list am sure I was on number one of your bucket list you need to see my new playlist. CONGRATULATIONS YOU have archived one thing in life of making feel less and continuously stabbing on the scar  that I showed you..
I WASN'T WRONG TO TRUST YOU..

© 2024 TROYVID


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The poem captures the pain of broken promises and resulting SELF doubt.the imagery of playlist and to do list depth but the shift in tense and pronouns could be smother for clearer storytelling

Posted 2 Months Ago



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Added on March 10, 2024
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TROYVID
TROYVID

Lusaka , Zambia



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