Just Us

Hold my hand and

 walk

with me

Before you dance with me

Let's move like we still

got it

 

With your head on

my shoulder

I can still feel

you smile

Swaying to the music

Let's stay like this awhile

 

If slow turns to fast

I wanna still make

it last

But you can slow down

if you want to

It's not about the time

But I'll keep that in line

Dancing like we want to

Just me and you

 

It's just us

in the world

I'm your boy

And you're my girl

Holding each other close

Like it's supposed to be

The rhythm we feel

custom made for all to see

 

We walk in love

Through the rain

and sunshine

With our sights not

just on what's above

You will always know

what's on my mind

Reviews

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. ah, beautiful ... and that last stanza is just unbelievably poetic and consuming ... my now absconding soul mate wanted us to go for salsa classes ... but i ducked ... there were other pressures ... anyway, this is quite the song i'd love to dance to with him ... absolutely stunning poetry ...

[Indecisive and Loving I..]

I have to be honest. This poem made me cry. The first two stanzas made me just EXPLODE into tears. (Going through a rough patch in life, and it's not very fun)
The feeling of love is amazing, and varies from person to person. You seemed to capture the perfect kind of love - the "let's sit here and just hold each other and not let go" love. The kind of love that every girl hopes for...
I loved this poem :)
Thank you, for the tears... (no sarcasm!)

[just is]

This is amazing, I really enjoyed this wonderfully written write. The emotions in this, it's very feeling

[Angel Bird]

That's how love is meant to be. Not necessary to see each other, to feel and know the other.
Knowing the words before the other is about to say them. That's how love is meant to be...
Great poem filled with warmth and peace in the knowledge there is someone who completes us.