Toast

Toast

A Poem by TTBoy28

 

 

Expensive champagne

less bubbles held by the stem

still foam at the top

© 2010 TTBoy28


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. so, was it dom perignon ? ... is the question ... as this senryu is as good as that ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is one truly great senryu. Creates a very enticing image Mmm...
I can also see it as a metaphor for several things.
Wonderful job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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TTBoy28
TTBoy28

Atlanta, GA



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The truth shall set you free. I try to be adventurous. I am spontaneous. I love nature but love to write only about personal events. You can tell when something is made up. It could still sound g.. more..

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