The Bra

 

What's supported on top

can also be counted on

down below

As woman may or may not be

top heavy

Still special care is given to her

So Man can hold his fruit close

in one way or another

Strapping himself in from

behind or in front can cause

slippage if his crop is not worthy

to be cradled

Yet the man's stem is extended

at the sight of an elongated pacifier

With her jollies even hidden

they are not

For man has to toy with his

in her presence

to prove that he has something

there

Reviews

[Indecisive and Loving I..]

Had to read this a couple of times to fully absorb the intention.
First of all, the title grabbed me as well as the first few lines. Good job with that!
This was a fantastic poem, I must say!

"For man has to toy with his
in her presence
to prove that he has something
there"
These few lines kind of threw off the mood of the poem, in my eyes. It confused me, as well. Maybe try rewording it?

Aside from that, I completely agree with this poem. It's not what's on the outside that matters, it's what's on the inside :)

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