The Writer's Block

The Writer's Block

A Poem by TTBoy28

 

She included him inside her walls

Though color-less as they were

together they made a colorful pair

Indignant yet diligent challenging each other

to remain as devastated as their inability

for conception

 

Her inclusion into his domain

shattered his expectation of her

intelligence reigning supreme

 

No cohesion with lost hope

written on the walls of despair

their misguidance of love and fear

splattered all four sides and ceilings

with only what they knew best

Their painting style rivalled the stars

as he dipped and dipped

and applied the necessary coats that

well-defined her boundaries

and his

Pants and groans

moans became chants

and graced the pages

that set the stages unplugged

by indecision and frustration

 

However,

 when words could not be laid

on the plain platform

they created inspiration

© 2010 TTBoy28


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. wow ... poignant and intriguing ... "as devastated as their inability for conception" ? ... i wonder why ... and these lines are really heart breaking ...

Her inclusion into his domain
shattered his expectation of her
intelligence reigning supreme

. the day my now absconding soul mate came to live with me ... he wrote ... "my ego has landed" on my white board ... seven months later ... started the beginning of our black out ... but yes ... inspiration stays ... almost interminably ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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. wow ... poignant and intriguing ... "as devastated as their inability for conception" ? ... i wonder why ... and these lines are really heart breaking ...

Her inclusion into his domain
shattered his expectation of her
intelligence reigning supreme

. the day my now absconding soul mate came to live with me ... he wrote ... "my ego has landed" on my white board ... seven months later ... started the beginning of our black out ... but yes ... inspiration stays ... almost interminably ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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TTBoy28
TTBoy28

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The truth shall set you free. I try to be adventurous. I am spontaneous. I love nature but love to write only about personal events. You can tell when something is made up. It could still sound g.. more..

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