Give Me Something That Feelings Can't Express

If you give me your hand

 I may not take it

If you give me your mind

 I'm sure to fake it

If you lend me your voice

 I may not listen

If you give me a choice

 I may never glisten

If you tell me I wasn't hurt

 I may lose myself

If you tell me if was my fault

 my soul will rest on a shelf

If you believe what I told you

 right from the very start

If you pull me close to you then

 I will know that you do have a heart

Reviews

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. your understanding of love is astonishing ... poignant, deep and overwhelming ... i cannot begin to tell you how much i relate to this poem ... to me, it's so me ... thank you for this ...

[Angel Bird]

It somehow feels like these lines have been created to be absorbed by some specific eyes, and tells it all - the truth bared for everyone to see here.
This is great - it's an easy and rhythmic read and it has a very depth. I like this very much.