I guess...

I guess...

A Poem by The Grammar Nazi

I didn't know what you wanted
I never even had a clue
I guess I don't even know what I wanted
But all I seem to want is you

Life's truly a never ending wheel
It's honestly true
It's like not wanting to feel
Because you don't know what to do

Every time I see your face
It makes my head go crazy
I thought you were my saving grace
That's why I called you my baby

In the end, you see life's a trip
Never knowing what's going to come
Never actually having a grip
The end just makes you go numb

It's probably better off this way
It's probably actually right
When you looked into my eyes that way
I thought I saw the light

Life's going to end
But this feeling probably won't
There's always a way to bend
But I just normally don't

The way loving you made me feel
Was the best I felt in years
Then you decided to break the wheel
And made me want to drown in tears

I'd assume life has more simplicity
Just have to slow down the pace
Now I feel like I'm full of toxicity
And I'd never win the race

You have what you want
While I'm left with naught
All you seem to do is flaunt
I guess you're truly worse than I'd thought

© 2008 The Grammar Nazi


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"Life's truly a never ending wheel
It's honestly true
It's like not wanting to feel
Because you don't know what to do"

This is really a nice one..unique and different with a great flow.
But I donno why I found the piece with the sense of pessimism in it!
May be its like my style of reading...or...I donno..


But! it in indeed a great work!
Superb read :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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The Grammar Nazi
The Grammar Nazi

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