Third Eye

Open your mind
and search inside,
for the key of freedom
in the darkness it hides.

Reviews

[Rana]

I like how you used 'third eye' to refer to the mind. Meaningful, beautiful. What I found best about this was how you sketched this picture: the thoughts are the key of freedom and they are visually colorless and dark but yet there's a metaphorical light in them. Plus, the rhyme sounds really good. I love this! :)

[Mara]

Thank you, so glad you liked it :)!

[CiNtsaLis]

*GASP* this took my breath away~ I need some air *fanning my face* It's so beautiful! D:

[Mara]

thank you, glad you like it :)

[terry smith]

you must be reading my mind...i lost my car keys in the darkness this morning...raining like crazy and no light whatsoever....

[Mara]

ahaha did you find them in the end? :P

[terry smith]

...no i found them on the ground...lolol