Battle scars

A scar

for a sin

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Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

Excellent use of font and spacing hun, gives the poem a whole other dimension. It's simplicity in style emphasises it's deeper meaning, great job :D XxXx

[WillaDanvers]

This is so simple but conveys a strong message. Love this! It doesn't need anymore than you have given it, you are talented my friend!

[Emily]

Love this!
Keep on writing!!

[Jerryyoung1z]

Great write, to pack so much in just few lines is indeed wonderful. Keep writing

[Mara]

Thank you:)!

[Jerryyoung1z]

You're welcome

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

*snaps* I love this Tee! Seriously, the phasing is so right for this mood and subject matter. *bows down* we are not worthy

[Mara]

Thank you! So glad you love it :)

[Jamestown]

Few words that say so much:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mara]

Thank you:)!

[Coyote Poetry]

I have many scars. They become honored scars with old age. You said a handful in the short poem. I liked the poem. Thank you Tee for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mara]

Thank you, glad you liked it:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.