Greenery Crofters

Greenery Crofters

A Poem by Tahsin.Z🍁
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Two greenery crofters 
One's loving and spiteful's another 
Shall they unite?

She used to relish the sunflowers of his lea;
adore the droning bees
Never grasped that her mustards are more sublime
than his sunflowers that shine for nearly ten days  

In rancour he used to spit on her field;
conspire to blight her green sward
But she imbibed and guzzling his pungent jeers
Mellow yellow robust flowers 
she thrived, they're alive

Two divergent lives
One did prosper and another made strife
They shan't unite 
"Rage fizzes in anger while descending the energy 
Love blooms in grace;
bathes in lukewarm milk and honey"

© 2020 Tahsin.Z🍁


Author's Note

Tahsin.Z🍁
Walk out if it doesn't work out

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The overall feel I got from this is that neither character spoke, which may be why they are looking with different eyes now, knowing communication will not come.
I would file their current situation under "pre-doomed", the moments before clarity sets and they know only one ending.
When their words dry, their end shall follow.
If they are anything like me, they will overcompensate with the next one and scare them off by talking too much... If only we could find that balance 😀

Posted 1 Month Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Month Ago

Brilliant said Lorry. when their words dry, their end shall follow. It's so lame to hold the lit can.. read more
Lorry

1 Month Ago

Oh okay, I'll have a spiced rum n pepsi then 😀
Wow, ever so lovely. This is written with a wonderful flow. much enjoyed this

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much Brandie...Be blessed :)
A beautiful poem! two opposites are shown in two figures, one is loving rancor other is loving him. clearly, they shan't unite being a "Two divergent lives". nice read, Tahsin :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

THANK YOU!!😄
Some people are not meant to be together and it is better that way. The imagery you employ is so lovely. Well written. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much for the appreciation sweet Lydia! :)
Shall they unite or nor.leave it to god.he will decided it for you

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Hmm..thanks for sharing your thoughts my friend :)
Some things are never meant to be. 'Opposites attract' is an overrated dictum. But not many nutters end up falling for it hook, line and sinker eventually. Thank God, for ditties like your last line- every hopeless romantic should read that.

Splendid write, Tahsin.

Best,
M.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Goodness! Agreed to you dear Mallika😊
Be blessed and Cheers! ;)
I loved this poem...You know sometimes you write such kind of stuff that keeps me stunned..And this is an epitome of it..Love is not gaining something or someone but it is losing everything including oneself for someone..Different people with different life , different worlds , different aspirations yet it makes a perfect love story ...A perfect love story is not the one where two people unite but the one where love is true...Some of the lines in these poem were just too beautiful..It was hard for me to accept the fact that those lines were written by a 16 year old girl...My cute princess has started writing things like an experienced writer...Great work....You are indeed a talented writer Tany...
Well done and keep it up...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing..
Take care..
Riddhi

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Star of sky...beloved Riddhi of mine...Thanks so much for this delightful review!😚😚
May.. read more
Riddhi

1 Year Ago

If I am the star , then you are the moon , brightest of all in the night sky...I am feeling so happy.. read more
Two dissimilar people > Exact opposites > Scheduled for disaster as a loving couple I fear

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

And what does that mean?😮
θεά 

1 Year Ago

Shalom is a Hebrew word meaning peace, harmony, wholeness, completeness, prosperity, welfare and tra.. read more
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

In that case...Shalom Mallika😀
Eloquently expressed and digested. Love and scorn. A disaster in the making.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Yess...sometimes they do...and there melts A Solidified Soul ;) love n hugs😚
Dawn

1 Year Ago

👌😎❤️......
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

😁😁😁...!!!
Two divergent lives indeed, one filled with love while the other is filled with scorn. That is a recipe for disaster. Some very beautiful lines here dear Tahsin. Love needs the right conditions to thrive.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Am grateful to your kindness my dear Christine...be blessed❤
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear Tahsin. Have a lovely day.
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Same to you! :)

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