A Leftover Figurine

A Leftover Figurine

A Poem by NO MORE
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Letting criminals enjoy their bottoms up....

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The rope loop
dangling in the air
gripped the ceiling,
in which one inserts
his fragile scruff and
kicks the bucket off.
Veins get shocked 
by sudden choke.
Heart resigns 
in minutes 
that was
assigned by
the Monarch 
of this universe.
A leftover figurine 
Is what the shot-term
rulers cherish. Also they
hand over justice to the
criminals; accusations 
to the clean hands.
This way a life
ends before 
Its end.

© 2019 NO MORE


Author's Note

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I meant "Innocents" as "Clean hands"
and "Dead body" as "Leftover figurine"
"The Almighty" as "The Monarch"
and "Unfair Government" as "Short-term rulers"

Many thanks for reading =)

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A powerful narrative Tahsin! I remembered Yakub Memon’s execution in 2015. This poem really got under my skin. Kudos!

Posted 4 Months Ago


DIVYA

4 Months Ago

You’re most welcome Tahsin. Do well in your exams. Sending you love 💕
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4 Months Ago

I will try hard!😩
DIVYA

4 Months Ago

I’m sure you will make it with great marks...
Wow. I love this. It has a great meaning but also very touching. I'm glad I found your page because you are an awesome writer! I enjoyed reading this. :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


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4 Months Ago

That's so inspiring of you dear....Wish you a wonderful life =)
A very powerful and hard hitting view & crafted into a deceptively attractive almost hypnotic form...and including some exceptional and most memorable lines... N

Posted 5 Months Ago


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5 Months Ago

Thanks my dear Neville...I'm honoured by your words...Truly sorry for replying late...you know the r.. read more
Neville Pettitt

5 Months Ago

no problem, no worries, my sincere pleasure my friend :)
Talk about a hard-hitting message... that’s exactly what the short-term rulers cherish!

Such wisdom! Are you sure you’re just a young girl??? :):)

V

Posted 5 Months Ago


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5 Months Ago

Not a young girl but a kiddo😁...I love get too patriotic sometimes....Thanks for your words dear .. read more
for You to be young full of energy and life and then to write something strong like this with great metaphors is impressive, I always see You writing about important subjects in the society, and again I find it amazing that a young girl like You is indeed CARE about it. be proud of Yourself my dear, I know as You grow up and spread Your wings wider and wider let it be in poetry or in the real world You are participating in making difference of this society.

Posted 5 Months Ago


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5 Months Ago

Goodness....I love your compliment😌....You've noticed the absolute truth of my writings...I'm mos.. read more
"Quis custodiet ipsos custodes?" "Who will guard the guards?"
That's what came into my mind when I read your piece.
Indeed a heavy pondering here and I like your phrasings too, really effective.
There's only to a limit of time these 'short-term rulers' can survive with their unfair ways but oh, the cost those 'clean hands' have to pay...
Good write.

Posted 5 Months Ago


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5 Months Ago

Am waiting to see those rulers reaching to the limit...truly...
Many thanks dear Yumna for re.. read more
Indeed filled with strong emotions in a 'shape' poem to make one think!

Posted 5 Months Ago


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5 Months Ago

Thank you! dear John....Be blessed :)
some heavy thinking going on here Tahzin
How is it that a sweet and gentle young thing, such as yourself, walks down these dark corridors?

Posted 5 Months Ago


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5 Months Ago

Tiny things fit in everywhere I guess😅....I thank you so much dear friend for reading this....Muc.. read more
i am reminded of a short essay i taught in English..."A Hanging" by George Orwell...
his theme...is that Capital Punishment is wrong....and he even has a statement in the essay that says "when the prisoner side stepped the puddle, I saw the unspeakable wrongness of cutting a life short"
death before death....Pilate thought he had Clean Hands....
a really absorbing piece of writing.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

And so I wish the world will witness zero corruption at a time...don't know if I can be present at t.. read more
This is such a powerful piece of writing, metaphorical thundering throughout. You use language with unequalled skill at times, ' ... in which one inserts - his fragile scruff and - kicks the bucket off. - Veins get shocked - by sudden choke. - Heart resigns - in minutes .. .. '

That is life powerful, corrective but harsh... and perhaps at times, dubious.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

You're very right with you words dear Emma with a doubt....and, we all shall be thankful to the situ.. read more
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6 Months Ago

Your* without*......my keypad will surely defame me one day😅
emmajoy

6 Months Ago

Thank YOU so much and believe me, i make far more mistakes than you.. in fact, have diplomas for the.. read more

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