Too Much Pressure

Too Much Pressure

A Poem by Tai Chi Italy
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An observational poem

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The only way

for me to truly relax

is to disappear.

 

No one around me

No one to bend my ear

A place to hide.

 

No distractions

No pressures

No fear.

 

The only way

I will survive

to see another year.

© 2010 Tai Chi Italy


Author's Note

Tai Chi Italy
Just one of those, 'had to get it out' poems. They call it 'Life' I call it being bullied to deaths door! I have been advised to allow authority, and anyone who wants to walk over me and mine, to do so, because, if I complain, the victimisation will gain pace. So don't complain folks, or you may need a REAL nurse, sooner than you think. STRESS KILLS

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We all need such a place to retreat to. I feel the stress bleed from me the moment I get into a swimming pool or set foot in a field as I walk out of my city...on my own.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It does and im glad you wrote this ,, hope it helped some ...
very well written Tai.. im so happy to see you back!
Stay, please.

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

S'good.
i think everyone can relate to this,
meditation is beneficial for feelings like this :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ugh, u nailed it and stress does suck...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 20, 2010
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Tai Chi Italy
Tai Chi Italy

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