Please

Please be safe,
Please be secure,
Pleaes take care,
Please stay pure.
I have to go,
I have to leave,
Let it snow,
Then believe.
Take this as a token,
The very last words I've spoken.
I'll miss thee terribly,
Terribly shall need,
For thou shalt know,
Thou shall exceed.
To great hights,
With many great lows.
From the garden of Eden,
To my garden that i sow.
I miss you terribly,
I miss you now.
And still today,
I wonder how.

Reviews

[Michael Lopez]

from the garden of eden...
to the garden I've sown.

maybe it will sound better
or maybe its in my head....
nice write though its under mine.
HA

laterz