Something's wrong with me

Something's wrong with me

A Poem by Tai-San

 

Something’s wrong,
I don’t know what.
It’s something bad…
My whole life feels shut.
 
My heart is pumping,
My legs feel weak.
I’m all around shaking,
And my class room seems bleak.
 
I’m very dizzy,
My heads pounding hard.
I feel like I can’t open my eyes for when I close them,
I remember the things that made me scarred.
 
Sweat is pouring down my face,
And I can barley breath.
I really need to know…
Oh my god…
What’s wrong with me?

© 2009 Tai-San


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Wow.. such ravaging emotions to share.. well written and flowing from I believe what may be a reality of a day in a life.. many are left with very mixed emotions over this winter.. if this is your true reality and not just a poem of fantasy then I would suggest speaking to someone ... there are times when we all need to seek therapy for issues.. sometimes we need help not saying that is the case here but if it is you don't want to ignore it or let it go.. those types of things can get worse if not looked at.. like a cut will get an infection if not treated properly! I think many will relate in some ways to this writing.. as we going through a process that is certainly history in the making.. it's much bigger than most understand and because we have never lived through such hardships many will not be able to handle it! Thank you for sharing and I sincerely hope that if anyone shares these feelings that they do something about it.. as it would be a shame to live like that daily.. or even once a week.. cheers to better times!!! =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Wow.. such ravaging emotions to share.. well written and flowing from I believe what may be a reality of a day in a life.. many are left with very mixed emotions over this winter.. if this is your true reality and not just a poem of fantasy then I would suggest speaking to someone ... there are times when we all need to seek therapy for issues.. sometimes we need help not saying that is the case here but if it is you don't want to ignore it or let it go.. those types of things can get worse if not looked at.. like a cut will get an infection if not treated properly! I think many will relate in some ways to this writing.. as we going through a process that is certainly history in the making.. it's much bigger than most understand and because we have never lived through such hardships many will not be able to handle it! Thank you for sharing and I sincerely hope that if anyone shares these feelings that they do something about it.. as it would be a shame to live like that daily.. or even once a week.. cheers to better times!!! =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Tai-San
Tai-San

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I am single and an age. I hate people, but I love them. I get scared very easily and, well, i wont say why. I'm a poet, though i'm bad at it. My best friends are: Wa Ya As The Gothic Cowboy, ATG, .. more..

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