I Can't Win

A Poem by Tai-San

I can't win,

I can't do it.

I love you,

And there is nothing more to it.

© 2009 Tai-San

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Secret Lover;;

Very nice.
It didn't need anymore than what was already here!
It's so simple and if it was said to someone it would make them melt.
Good work :]

Posted 14 Years Ago

Bud

I think this one says all that is needed. The feeling is the same for all who have experienced it. The details to be filled in by each individual reader. I like this. It has a personal quality...the kind that the reader can relate to the author, and yet feel very much a part of. Great piece!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Queen Jummarrium

i liked it. short, sweet, and right to the point. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on May 15, 2009

Author

Tai-San

New York

About

I am single and an age. I hate people, but I love them. I get scared very easily and, well, i wont say why. I'm a poet, though i'm bad at it. My best friends are: Wa Ya As The Gothic Cowboy, ATG, .. more..