Naughty Treat

Cinquain

Peel me

bare my sweet flesh

slowly, oh so slowly

mouth to tender firmness, consume

sated

Reviews

[Glenn McCrary�]

Mm I like this deliciously enticing :)

[Wicahpi]

a sensual Cinquain.
nicely done.

[Sheila Kline]

Ooooh, what a delightful "peel"! I am off to look for this treat!!...smiles
Your words spring forth to visually stimulate the mind and deliver a delectable and enjoyable feast!

[Honeypot]

An orange? I guess it doesn't matter because it is to me. I can smell it and feel the juice squirting beneath my fingers. I think I'm going to go look for one in the fridge. Great poem!

[angelina neves]

Uau! Delicious!