Frozen Cold

I do not need to explain

Innocent

 Eyes closed 

Lifted up 

Then controlled

 Bound by whisper

 Gagged by fear

 Silent screames

 Loud and clear

Evil touch 

Innocent gone

 Broken will 

I was his pawn 

Now... 

It's hard to say 

It can't be told 

What happned while

 Frozen Cold.

Author's Note

This is somehing that is deep in my mind, please ignore any misspellings thank you. Please give me feedback.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the flow and rhythm in this poem. Words had great rhyming too. Well done. Nicely written ☺

[Taz]

Thank You.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Broken Hearts]

Wow this is such a powerful and emotion-filled piece! Thanks for sharing.

[Taz]

Thank you for reading.

[K.L. Ravns]

wow so powerful with emotion. I feel sad that this could happen but empowered that writing can be an outlet and make people think.

[Taz]

Thank you for reading. I appriciate your feedback. Writing really is a way to escape the pain of reality by taking it out of your mind and putting it down onpaper.

[K.L. Ravns]

I do this through my writing. even though the characters are fictional the emotion behind them are real. Depression, fear and anxiety plague the main character in the novel I am writing. These are all things I have gone through. Please review my writing and I will continue to review yours.

[Taz]

No need to ask just send me a request and I will.

[K.L. Ravns]

I tried and for some reason its not working

[Taz]

Don't worry I will when I have time.

[K.L. Ravns]

for some reason it just worked. After trying for two days to send requests it magically worked.

[Taz]

lol it is ok.

[Eden-Rose]

So powerful and filled with so much emotion. Beautifully done dear!

[Taz]

Thank You my friend.

[Surya]

Haha, I guess there is something hidden in your words, I felt so.....and your work is pretty good here, short with apt. Words, a story well written in few lines....:)

[Taz]

Thank you for reading.

[H.N.Seal]

I love the emotion you poured into it. You really have a talent for writing. I'm so sorry that an event like that would have to be on your mind.

[Taz]

If I didn't pour out the emoton here then it woul eat me alive. Thank you for the compliment but I realy am no Jane austen.

[Daphnee]

Wow. I want to punch out the one who did this. The feeling of this is just so familiar to me. But whats sad is how young you are and I know how I felt during my experiences so I cant imagine it happening to such a beautiful soul.

[Taz]

Thank you so much your words mean more than you know.

[Stacy Purvis]

I feel...frozen. Thank you for sharing.

[Taz]

Thanks for reading.

[Gina]

This was so enthralling. It made me so engaged with your work. Always, Gina.

[Taz]

Thank you.