My Thoughts Right Now

As I lay here knife with me, 

My wounded soul says it's to be,

 It is this life I must leave, 

No trust nor love no mom to hug 

I feel no pain as I tug,

 Death Closer...

Author's Note

I made this the other day it does not apply to right now, I threw it out but then put it back up.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I am glad it doesn't apply to right now... I hope it doesn't apply anymore.
I just had someone I love try to commit suicide and I'm still going through the trauma.
I know life can be hard as hell, but we all pull through it, suicide is never the answer.

Anyway this poem was short but that's the funny thing, no matter how short a poem can still be very meaningful and powerful, because of the wording.
This was indeed very deep and powerful.
Keep writing :)

[Taz]

I definitely will.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

good :) :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. When the knife or gun is your best friend. We must escape this place. Your words made the reader feel the hurt and the sadness. Thank you Taz for sharing the powerful words.
Coyote

[Taz]

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure Taz and you are welcome.

[Broken Hearts]

I know it's hard after all you might've been through, but you got to find a way to climb out of that hole. Trust me, you've got to hold on. Wonderful piece by the way though.

[Sammie Sanchez]

i've felt this why before, back before i got help, but i know the edge well. i've let myself sink into that hole, trust me i don't ever want to be there ever again.i don't know how i survived but by my 'luck' i did. just hold on,trust me its worth it