The Great Fall

The Great Fall

A Poem by T. Edana Talbott



Lost a battle in which the reward, 
Was a tainted mind and a heart quite scorned. 

Chomped my tongue as a painful attempt, 
To hush the venom I spat and said.
Shook and cried, I even died.
Forgot the concept of reality and time...
Couldn't walk, couldn't talk, I refused to eat.
Couldn't write or read the walls.
Some might have said I'd lost it all.
This was my fall, to which I may never rise again.
But, no, no - not at all.
I won the war in which my prize,
Was a strengthened soul and a heart that shines.
My tongue as sharp and quick as it
Ever could have been, 
Yes it is fixed!
I shake and I cry, but I'm alive!
Appreciate the people and love in my life.
I can walk, I can talk.
I eat too much, I write and I read it all.
Some might even say I've not changed at all.
This was my fall to which I now stand tall.

© 2016 T. Edana Talbott


Author's Note

T.  Edana Talbott
Written March 27, 2015...This is a brief account of my disease (the Great fall) and my comeback to a healthier me.

If you're curious as to what I'm recovering from it's called ANTI-NMDA RECEPTOR WITH ENCEPHALITIS. Search it up if you'd like to learn more.

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So powerful...and inspirational.
Wonderful write

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

T.  Edana Talbott

7 Years Ago

Thank you Joy :)

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T.  Edana Talbott
T. Edana Talbott

El Cajon, CA



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