Descease

Descease

A Poem by Teenytot22

Beauty excretes waves of passion and lust,
Yet after death, it leaves nothing but dust.

© 2013 Teenytot22


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Very nice. Maybe expand on the beauty specifically.

Posted 10 Years Ago
Awesome poem. Just a thought, you could shorten the meter and make it a full on senyru! Just my humble opinion. It's probably more potent like this. Cool poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on June 12, 2013
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Teenytot22
Teenytot22

Walsall., West Midlands., United Kingdom



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