Leaving

I shall sit alone 

and think about pills 

and alcohol 

and razors 

and death... 

Peoples words are painful 

Bad words mean a thousand good 

Mixtures of hate and despise

I don't understand 

Why people spread so much hate...

I think it's a message 

A message to leave this world 

Behind and forget all the hate... 

But what if what I find is worse 

I don't know what to do.

 

Author's Note

All reviews welcome

Reviews

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

Strong poem, well thought out, im very proud of you :3 but you better be okay

[Chris]

I know and understand hurt... survived it as best as I could. And there IS a LOT of lonely in this world but also a lot worth staying for. Sometimes just a single "H'lo" really makes all the difference to somebody that needs it to be real. When two people are talking you aren't as alone anymore - ya know?

[Sami Khalil]

"I think it's a message

A message to leave this world

Behind and forget all the hate...




But what if what I find is worse

I don't know what to do."

A very good poem. I like the ending the most...:)

[Sophles]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)