Note

simmering her heart began to boil
Punishment for remaining loyal
To hopes and dreams formed in a moonlit glow
He'd charmed the birds out of the trees
Defenceless she fell to her knees
In awe of the bravado put on show
One look into that twinkling eye
Had reservations wave goodbye
Collapsing falling harder than the rain
Strong arms reached out breaking her fall
He played ken to her barbie doll
The lightening strike electrified her brain
The honeymoon was oh so grand
Like kids let loose in Disney land
She tasted heaven every time they kissed
He stripped her trust her skin her bone
The pictures in his unlocked phone
Engulfed her every fibre in red mist
Initial anger turned to shock
She tore at his first gift a frock
A silent scream was ripping at her throat
She pours a drink while counting pills
Neglecting her survival skills
She scribbles the first sentence of a note

Reviews

[Heli Butterfly]

Very Interesting !!! She tastes heaven everytime they kiss ha.... The words of Ur Poem speaks Expressive £ Beautiful Art.

[Tepo]

thanks Heli
I suppose I can get a wee bit carried away since I heard of poetic license lolread morethanks Heli
I suppose I can get a wee bit carried away since I heard of poetic license lol
Although young lovers are also a bit deluded at times
Very much appreciate your time

[barleygirl]

One of the best I've read on the topic of feeling suicidal. Usually "feeling suicidal" is painted in shades of gut-wrenching bleak. I love how you show this situation as an intense colorful & enticing ride for this narrator. We understand why she got tangled up & it's so palpable why she's feeling self-destructive after playing his fool & loving it. So true to life & so vividly slammed with high originality (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Tepo]

Such a kind review Margie
Really appreciate your support
Ta much