Empty Arms

when will my head give me some rest
It grants good thoughts a last request
Then shows you in that see through dress
Succumbing to his charms

Why should I turn the other cheek
When you're still playing hide and seek
The words your mouth refuse to speak
Are setting off alarms

Green eyes release a festering tear
The first to grace my face this year
My concrete jungle meets your fear
The lady from the farms

My life no longer feels my own
A drunken night and daily stone
Convince me that I'm not alone
Despite my empty arms

Reviews

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

such a wonderful piece here, like the flow and rhyme scheme as well.

[Tepo]

Thanks for the review ang
Much appreciated

[Just Kim]

So well expressed emotions, nicely written and rhymed so well

[Tepo]

Thanks for your support Kim
It is much appreciated

[John the Baptist]

Nicely rhymed. The downside is she may have gone astray. The upside is she ain't Eve.

[Tepo]

thanks John
No this was no eve
Truly appreciate your time