AN OUNCE OF GOOD 1957A Poem by Terry CollettA GIRL AND HER PARENTS IN 1957 AND BLACK MOODS.Once she left Benny on the stairs of the flats of Banks House she went indoors anxiously in case her father asked if she'd been speaking to the boy Benny that day at school she closes the door behind her and walks along the passageway past the kitchen and into the sitting room where her father and mother are at the dining table talking she looks at them then goes by into her bedroom don't forget to change out of your uniform her mother says no I won't forget she replies and so I sells him this car and he seemed pleased with it but his Mrs was saying how about the miles on the clock? o that just shows the car's done good service and you know cars run better the more miles they have shows they're good I tell the old bat Enid's father says her mother smiles Enid waits by her bedroom door then goes in in case her father says about Benny but he doesn't and she shuts her bedroom door behind her and stares at her bed it's neat and tidy and the room's been done nicely and she wonders if her mum is all right usually she leaves it for Enid to do and she undresses from her school uniform and puts on a brown dress and folds her uniform and puts it on a chair by her bed in case her father comes in and looks around to find stuff to moan about or punish her for and she stands by the window and looks out at the coal wharf with men on coal lorries and some on horse drawn carts she turns and goes back into the sitting room her father is still talking and seems in a good mood want some tea? her mother asks her yes please Enid says her mother gets a cup and saucer from the cupboard and pours her some tea and pulls out a chair for her at the table she sits down and her mother puts in a spoonful of sugar you should have seen the old bat's face when her old man paid up for the car though her father says to her mother and that and another good sale made it a good day he says that's good then her mother says sipping her tea Enid waits for her father to talk to her about seeing Benny she hopes he won't well how was your day then? her father asks her Enid looks at the cup it was good we had history and I like history she says her father nods didn't have no accidents at school wetting yourself then? he asks no she replies I was good and asked the teacher in good time good job too her mother says you seen that Benny boy at school? her father asks yes of course he's in my class at school Enid says looking at her father who gazes at her did you talk to him? yes Enid says I know you said not to but he talked to me first her father smiles don't worry about that it was just me being in one of my black moods you talk to him if you want Enid got to have a friend in this world haven't you he says she looks at him to see if he's joking or trying to catch her out but he looks at her mother and says if things go on as they are maybe we can have a week's holiday some place this year Enid sits and sips her tea still trying to take in her father's words the conversation of her parents seems to drift away even the promise of a week's holiday seems just words but he called her Enid and didn't hit her for talking to Benny and said she could maybe she muses sipping her tea Benny was right that even a bad person has an ounce of good. © 2015 Terry Collett |
StatsAuthorTerry CollettUnited KingdomAboutTerry Collett has been writing since 1971 and published on and off since 1972. He has written poems, plays, and short stories. He is married with eight children and eight grandchildren. on January 27t.. more..Writing
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