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Hide behind your colorful clothes
Your make up
Your pain, your woes
When will you wake up
Nobody knows
Just shut up
Painted nails and toes

So ugly on the inside
Kinda pretty on the outside
Will you be mine
Will you be mine
It doesn’t last much
Nothing ever does much

Give it all away
Give him everything
It’s the things you say
That make me wanna stay
Run away

He doesn’t love you,
You don’t love you.

Author's Note

Please ignore any grammar or spelling mistakes.
Thanks

Reviews

[rose]

You've done a good job of setting the stage for the last line which is the most powerful. I didn't see any grammatical errors.