Bitter Words

Its an inspiring poem for all the men

                                                    THE BITTER WORDS

   The words,

                        the words which were left behind

     The sounds which were trying to injure the

                                            wounds,

                         the wounds of the heart.

 Can`t one can forget the words

 Can`t one can cure the wounds

 Really can`t one can forget the words,

 the words which were truly bitter, 

 The bitter words;

 Brave your heart, cure your wounds,

 be the king, be the queen..

 Let them speak, let them shout

 and make your ears bound

 Don`t hear and injure your heart

 with the words, the words which were truly bitter

 The bitter words... 

Author's Note

please ignore the grammatical mistakes, and please tell me about the lines

Reviews

[Elizabeth Mars]

I had a bit of trouble following the poem overall, but individually I really like the lines you wrote, "Brave your heart, cure your wounds" and "The sounds which were trying to injure the wounds", all the lines are very poetic just a little confusing when you read it all together.

[Tezu]

Thank you so much.. at least i got an encouragement through your review on my poem.

[Relic]

Unfortunately, the lines are a bit hard to understand but I think I know what you're saying. We should be strong in spite of negative things said against us.

Let them speak, let them shout? Are you referring to people who say bad things or are you referring to the wounds themselves?

[Tezu]

thank you and i will try to improve my poems.

[Tezu]

thank you. And yes the line "let them speak, let them shout" refers to the people who say bad things to you and try to hurt you.