Serpent’s Tongue

I'm never sure how to categorize my writing, just bare with me. :)

We took the forbidden fruit.. and we’re now suffering for it. We were given choices, but we chose the wrong ones. The poison on the serpent’s tongue is bitter with envy, although, it stings with hatred. Its venom slithers without form, antagonizing those whom lived their lives without knowing. We all fall short, but we were made to love one another. Pass on the love.

Author's Note

I would love to hear your thoughts on my pieces, criticism is accepted. However, my reason for doing it is self expression.