Beaten

A simple inspirational poem

Just the thought of you makes her wanna hit you bad,

Just to hear your voice gonna make him mad.

Your innocence was lost since you opened your eyes,

Young girl, you're beaten.

 

You cried every day and night,

because they never seemed to treat you right.

The way they look at you, you're never enough,

Since day one, you're frightened.

 

You want to cut it off,

you wanna leave the world, i understand.

But is it too much to ask if i beg you out,

Even just this time, please take my hand. 

 

You're beaten bad, been hit in every way.

the way you smile never looks okay.

You want to cut it short but please hear me out,

because once the precious gem is gone, some worlds might fall apart.

 

You're just a diamond in the rough,

Life is honing you to make you tough.

I know it's not fair but know you're special.

God is always here with you in every trial.

 

Don't cut your life short, my friend.

because what's in store for you is more than what's in it for them.

Please just hold on a little longer.

After these you'll find yourself much stronger.

 

Their hits will be nothing anymore,

You'll feel the numbness in your bones.

You'll feel so dumb that you let them into your head,

you'll realize you're better so you'll smile instead.

 

But through all this, know you're not alone,

There's a Big H.E. who cries with you all along.

From all this time, there are hundreds more,

who got beaten like a diamond.

 

Be one of the survivors of your days,

prove them wrong because you'll be okay.

Once you have your wings, lets go and fly,

let's leave them down and this time they'll cry.

Author's Note

All reviews about my works are very welcome and will be fully appreciated! thank you in advance :) xx

Reviews

[Kuldeep desai]

Hey this poem is really good i liked it......
You're just a diamond in the rough,

Life is honing you to make you tough.

I know it's not fair but know you're special.

God is always here with you in every trial...........i liked this stanza very much and also last one is an really heart touching stanza keep it up very well done........

[Jenny Pasahol]

Oh.. I'm really glad you liked it :) thank you! xx