tell me you will be good

tell me you will be good

A Poem by Don

Listen. I know you needed space
i know you need that
Im not going to ask you to stay
I know this love is real
thats why i know this love is strong
So even. When your gone i still feel you here
I know its not right for me to ask
But tell me that you'll be good
Lie if you need to
Lie if think you should
Lie if you have too
You dont. Need to hide your bad habits
Just tell me that you'll. Be good
Lie if you need to
Lie. If you think you should
Lie if have too
Just tell me you'll. Be good...

© 2014 Don


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Don
My phone. Just addes it it cx

Posted 9 Years Ago


"You dont. Need to hide your bad habits " you dont need a period and then no capitalization
"Just tell me you'll. Be good..." No period but since its a pause put a coma :)
Other then that i like this its good :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on October 18, 2014
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Rowland Heights , CA



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