This is what poetry does..it says look again and this time see what you are looking at and this poem is a perfect example of that..also your work is so well crafted , I keep coming back to read more.
Omygosh Lark you brought tears to my eyes,
everyone is to blame,
all is manipulation, and blindeness
the facade of it all,
and reiterating, you ask are I to be false,
gosh, great scenario, ----mishel
You give a reader a sense of false confidence, only to grasp it by the throat and pull it out of him again.
You chant, and we chant along with you. He is wrong, he is a lie, everything he depicts is a mask created by others. False, false, false!
But then, are we any better?
Extremely well written, with a delightful flow.
Something that will circle a reader's mind for days to come.
I guess I'm something of an old-school poet. I always write with fixed meter and rhyme, and for the most part that's what I enjoying reading too.
"I'd as soon write free verse as play tennis with th.. more..