Et Flori Lucem

A boy in love with a girl cause of the hope she brings into his world, yet he realizes it wasn't for him.

She was my light

Intense and bright

Sad to see

She shone not for me

Reviews

[Gee]

A case of unrequited love eh,as Alan said,short and sweet.Well written

[The Auctor]

Thank you!

[alanwgraham]

Brief and to the point!
I think the last line is a bit awkward. how about 'shone not for me'
Well done,
Alan

[The Auctor]

Thanks for the review! Sorry I'm not good with english (not it's my native language). Thanks for fixing my grammar I will change it.

[alanwgraham]

Good but it would read even better if you drop the initial she
Alan